After listening to many 5 part paragraphs I think I have heard almost every single view of the book To Kill a Mockingbird. Some papers were very interesting to listen to and other not so much. All of the main critique that were repeatedly mentioned all related to the quotes chosen. If the concrete details are not perfect and completely supportive of the topic sentence then the paper will not be as good as it could be. I think that if some papers had this change they would be much more exciting.
My paper personally took a lot of time and I feel I put my best effort into it. However there are some areas in which I could improve. One of my critiques was to bring up a topic to the topic sentence that was in the concluding sentence. If I had added this sentence I would have had a much more thorough paper and a complete thought of the theme I had chosen.
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